Jao, you are an ass.

Hey, JaoArroz, i'd like to see you do better. how was the animation poor? you've got really bad taste, cunt.

Now to the author: That is one badass plot you got there, i can tell this is gonna be one hell of a series, the only problem is that at some points the mouths didn't move to show they were talking, other than that, it was great.

very nice

that was very good, but it doesn't seem to make sense to me (maybe im just dumb) oh and to ragon146: can you not replace all your e's with 3's? its not cool and really annoying to read -_-

wow

i really think this should be the commercial, good job, no constructive critisizm i could find ^_^

Overall: 9

Violence: 2, there wasn't much violence in it, but there doesn't necessarily have to be, so this doesn't matter

Interactivity: 9 it was really good, but the controls were a bit jerky

Comedy: 0 but once again, this is not a necessary factor

Overall 9/5 Good job! you're a pretty good scriptor :)

nice

try mine out:

90---0--------0----888888--0---0---0-
---9----9----------------------------
-----------c----0--------0----bbbbbb-
-0---0---0----c----c-----------------
----------------------a--6-0--6-7-6-7 -76-------6-7-7-7-7-7-76-a--6-a--6---
---------------------------------

;)

uhh

the other instruments/ sounds were good, but the drums (or whatever that is, sounds like someone hitting a metal garbage can) were wayyyyyyyy off beat

Respect.

Respect.